Suggestions: 1. Number your questions 2. Capitalize Walmart 3. Your blogpost title has a typo 4. Profession question add the option of "student" 5. Fix the paragraph question. It wouldn't take my response. Try it yourself to see what I mean if you have trouble understanding what I am saying! Good job Jared. I like this topic. Smart choice!
ReplyDeleteSuggestions: 1. Number your questions 2. Capitalize Walmart 3. Your blogpost title has a typo 4. Profession question add the option of "student"
5. Fix the paragraph question. It wouldn't take my response. Try it yourself to see what I mean if you have trouble understanding what I am saying!
Good job Jared. I like this topic. Smart choice!